- = Eight paragraphs
- Introduction
- Summary of Macbeth
- Theme 1
- Theme 2
- One way the two themes interact/overlap/build on one another
- Second way the two themes interact/overlap/build on one another
- Impact of the two themes on the the drama
- Conclusion
- Phrases: participial, appositive, absolute
- Compound Sentences
- Four Vocabulary
- Assignment: Using one of the the four options, hook your audience. Your goal? To make your audience want to read to the last sentence of your paper.
- Utilize one of these methods:
- Mrs. Gillmore's Introduction (Used "The Masque of the Read Death"
- Edgar Allan Poe takes his readers to the edge of death in his short story "The Masque of the Red Death"...and leaves them there. A talented gothic author, Poe grabs his reader from the first paragraph and leaves them at the last sentence, grasping reality. That is right, through the use of allegory, the story's characters, setting, and plot take the reader to a deeper meaning: People have a choice concerning the emotional impact that outside events have upon their lives.
- Using the notes you gathered from summarizing each act of Macbeth, now write a summary of your summaries. REMINDER: your summary should...
- Include Title
- Be concise
- Utilize vivid, specific diction
- Mrs. Gillmore's Sample Summary
- Edgar Allan Poe's short story "The Masque of the Red Death," consisting of fourteen paragraphs, relates the power and inevitability of death in the lives of the characters. Prince Prospero invites a 1000 guests to his house in which he locks those in attendance to avoid the plague that is passing through his land. As they celebrate their escape at a masquerade ball, his guests enjoy six of the seven rooms, seeming to avoid the black and red seventh room that contains a clock which reminds them hourly of the passage of their lives. At midnight, an invited guest arrives and soon reveals itself as the very enemy from which they have attempted to avoid, only to quickly learn that this guest comes for one and all.
- This theme should be supported with evidence from throughout the drama.
- Three chunks required.
- Chunk =
- Signal Phrase + Evidence = the best quotes from the text to prove the above theme.
- Two Commentary = explains why this evidence proves the above theme.
SP + Evidence: In paragraph four, Poe initially establishes this mood through his seven rooms, whose "...windows were of stained glass whose color varied in accordance with the prevailing hue of the decorations of the chamber into which it opened," beginning with the color blue and ending with the colors black and red.
- CM 1
- CM 2
- CM 1: Needs to explain why this evidence supports the topic sentence.
- CM 2: Further explanation of how/why this evidence supports the topic sentence.
SP + Evidence Then, in paragraph seven, Poe directly alludes to the thematic topic dreams when he describes, "To and fro in the seven chambers there stalked, in fact, a multitude of dreams. And these -- the dreams -- writhed in and about, taking hue from the rooms, and causing the wild music of the orchestra to seem as the echo of their steps."- CM 1
- CM 2
Concluding Sentence:
Final THEME 1 Paragraph:
Final THEME 1 Paragraph:
Life is dreamlike. In paragraph four, Poe
initially establishes this mood through his seven rooms, whose "...windows
were of stained glass whose color varied in accordance with the prevailing hue
of the decorations of the chamber into which it opened," beginning with
the color blue and ending with the colors black and red. This coloration affected the characters,
placing them in a state of out-of-worldness.
The guests were further invited to remove them themselves from the
reality of what was occurring outside the walls. Later, in paragraph seven, the guests wear
masques that consisted of "...much glare and glitter and piquancy and
phantasm...There was much of the beautiful, much of the wanton, much of the
bizarre." Again, Poe furthers the mood,
creating scenes that represented the extreme difference in reality of the world
and actions within the party. In
addition, if the guests had any fears, their masks offered quite the disguise, covering
up any concerns of the unknown. Then, in
paragraph seven, Poe directly alludes to the thematic topic dreams when he
describes, "To and fro in the seven chambers there stalked, in fact, a
multitude of dreams. And these -- the dreams -- writhed in and about, taking
hue from the rooms, and causing the wild music of the orchestra to seem as the
echo of their steps." Could the
dreams be turning into nightmares? With
these images, the author sets the scene of one paralleling the outside world, a
world where The Read Death will arrive, becoming a reality and not a
dream. Thus, life, while dreamlike,
still holds the certainty of Death’s visit.
Theme 2: Three Chunks Required
Topic Sentence: Another theme that this short story supports is that people often become a victim of their own fears.
SP + Evidence: Prince Prospero illustrates this concept in paragraph two when he brings "The courtiers, having entered, brought furnaces and massy hammers and welded the bolts," thus locking in the guests in an attempt to keep the Red Death from entering the "life" of the party.
- CM 1
- CM 2
SP + Evidence: Located in the seventh room, the clock, as described in paragraph five, was an hourly reminder of the passage of time: "while the chimes of the clock yet rang, it was observed that the giddiest grew pale, and the more aged and sedate passed their hands over their brows as if in confused reverie or meditation."- CM 1
- CM 2
SP + Evidence: Finally, Red Death, himself, both physically and literally, in paragraph eight, symbolized the ultimate fear these guests had as they became "aware of the presence of a masked figure" and "there arose at length from the whole company a buzz, or murmur, expressive of disapprobation and surprise -- then, finally, of terror, of horror, and of disgust."
Concluding Sentence:
Final Theme 2 Paragraph:
- CM 1
- CM 2
Concluding Sentence:Final Theme 2 Paragraph:
Another theme that “The Masque of the Red Death”
supports is that people often become a victim of their own fears. Prince Prospero illustrates this concept in
paragraph two when he brings "The courtiers, having entered, brought
furnaces and massy hammers and welded the bolts," thus locking in the
guests in an attempt to keep the Red Death from entering the "life"
of the party. The Prince realizes that
Death is close and hopes, in his conceited state to create a barrier, locking
out his greatest fear. In addition, located
in the seventh room, the clock, as described in paragraph five, was an hourly
reminder of the passage of time:
"while the chimes of the clock yet rang, it was observed that the
giddiest grew pale, and the more aged and sedate passed their hands over their
brows as if in confused reverie or meditation." Here, the reader witnesses the guests as they
begin to succumb to their fears, victimizing themselves in their paleness and
confusion. The clock, symbolizing time,
becomes sound effect that represents the last sounds each may hear. Finally, Red Death, himself, both physically
and literally, in paragraph eight, symbolized the ultimate fear these guests
had as they became "aware of the presence of a masked figure" and
"there arose at length from the whole company a buzz, or murmur,
expressive of disapprobation and surprise -- then, finally, of terror, of
horror, and of disgust." With these
responses, instead of protecting themselves, they were filled with emotion, not
action. Reacting in such a negative
manner, the guests offer further submission to an enemy they could not
overcome: their own fears of death. Thus, the guests prove that life is what we
make it: one of security or one full of
fear.
Relation 1: Two Chunks Required
Topic Sentence: One way in which these two themes relate lies within the mix of dreams and fears...resulting in nightmares.
Topic Sentence: One way in which these two themes relate lies within the mix of dreams and fears...resulting in nightmares.
- NOTE: I left my notes at school...and for some reason, no picture is posted here of my notes...sooooo this one, I will draft tomorrow at school! AND when my phone was "borrowed," all my photos were deleted. Sorry!
Relation 2: Two Chunks Required
Topic Sentence: Another relation of these two themes results in a fantasy world based on a dystopic society.SP + Evidence: As described in paragraph two, one symbol of this is the abby itself, which "was an extensive and magnificent structure, the creation of the prince's own eccentric yet august taste. A strong and lofty wall girdled it in. This wall had gates of iron."
- CM 1
- CM 2
SP + Evidence Futhermore, in paragraph seven, amongst the masqueraders, "There were much glare and glitter and piquancy and phantasm," while the masque of the Red Death, "which concealed the visage was made so nearly to resemble the countenance of a stiffened corpse."
- CM 1
- CM 2
Concluding Sentence:
Impact of Themes on Drama: Two Chunks
The impact of the above two themes lies within the duality of the messages and, thus, in the duality of the effect, both on the writer and the reader.SP + Evidence: Author Poe's tone may be summed in that death is inevitable, for as his concluding sentence he stated, "And Darkness and Decay and the Red Death held illimitable dominion over all."
- CM 1
- CM 2
This tone in turn affects the mood, the reader's response to this message, for the reader, too, must know that death, while real, may be quite grotesque, and, as summed up in the final paragraph, "had come like a thief in the night."
- CM 1
- CM 2
Concluding Sentence:
Conclusion
- Use one of these three methods:
- Think to the Future
- Challenge Your Reader
- Pose a Question
- Mrs. Gillmore's Conclusion: Who among us has not felt the sting of death? Who among us has not felt the finality of that moment? Let me leave you with this challenge: Who among us, having read this short story, realizes that while Poe's lessons may strike close to home also realize that Poe never addresses an afterlife that has a positive outcome? Hummmm...could Poe be writing this as a warning to those whose afterlife consists of fear and a complete dystopic setting? Maybe?
