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Disclaimer: Teenagers, beware! This one is about you!
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In an article entitled "Decision-Making Is Still a Work in Progress for Teenagers" posted at Brain Connection, Gargi Talukder, a graduate student at Stanford University, claims that due to lack of brain development, teenagers simply cannot make decisions as adults do. Beware #2: once you read past the brain jargon, this makes sense!According to Talukder, researchers have discovered that "adolescent brains are simply not yet equipped to think through [rational decision making processes when facing emotional decisions] in the same way [as adults]." Thus, teens, facing tough emotional decisions, feel as if they are up against an insurmountable wall, a place where adequate words fail them, a foe so harsh as to leave them nearly defenseless against their own brains. As a parent, I have lived this with my fourteen-year-old daughter, who often exclaims (or is it whines?), "I don't know. Just tell me what to do." Even when I further attempt to encourage her to make a decision, she simply responds again with the above words.
In a recent study, Jay Giedd, along with colleagues at the National Institutes of Mental Health, conclude, "...development in the frontal lobe continues throughout adolescence and well into the early twenties." Good news! Teens who continue to make "bad" decisions now may see the proverbial light at the end of the tunnel, for as they age, the decision making part of the brain continues to mature, offering a "second chance" to change their behaviors and decision making processes.
What should teens do until the age of full brain maturity? Talukder concludes by encouraging teens to depend on parents and teachers for advice to make the mature decisions needed throughout these years of the brain's growth, for, yes, the brain continues to be a "work in progress" until the age of 25 or so. Finding a confidante...or two, teens better equip themselves with the tools they need during these formative years while determining their own futures. Some teens need hammers and picks to clear through the rubble of their decisions; some need brushes and paint to cover a canvass covered with too many scenes; others need computers, iPhones, ipods, and such to research paths to their futures.
I have heard this question asked many times: "What are earth were you thinking?" When I reflect back on this, nearly every time this was being asked of a person younger than 25. I have asked it. I have heard parents and teachers alike ask this of students. The reality? The answer may simply be, "I wasn't thinking." Sure, both sides are frustrated, but should the parent not be to blame here? For did they not live through this very same situation? Surely, patience should be more expected from the parent?
Good news! Millions...no, billions...have lived through this brain development, many quite successfully! Just keep thinking!
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Work Cited
Talukder, Gargi. "Decision-Making Is Still a Work in Progress for Teenagers." Brain Connection.
20 Mar. 2013. Web. 21 Oct. 2013.
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For More Information
Dobbs, David. "Beautiful Minds." National Geographic. Oct. 2011. Web. 22 Oct. 2013.
